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Age: 3
Allignment: Homunculi

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PostSubject: The Sin of Envy   The Sin of Envy I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 26, 2009 8:05 pm

Name: Envy

Street Name: Kinshi Toho

Height: Her most neutral height is 5'2"

Weight: Her most neutral weight is 100 lbs

Age: 3

Physical Age: Most neutral age is 14

Appearance: When she's not taking the image of anyone else, she prefers to have light blue, flowing hair that leads to her back, her eyes almost matching in color. Her skin is a fairly pale tone and holds no blemishes, seemingly perfect. She'll wear whatever clothing she feels like wearing that day, mostly clothing that holds a light color.

Sin: Envy

Location of Dead Body: Preserved in the Fuhrer's mansion, her old room.

Specialty: Shape shifting, mostly taking others appearances

History: When she was alive, she was the daughter of the Fuhrer. She grew as a cheery girl, always bringing trouble towards her. She grew up in luxury, always getting what she wanted, some things by alchemy, some not. She herself never learned much alchemy, but she could use the simple stuff from time to time. One day, though, she was quite unlucky with what trouble found her. She was leisurely walking down the hall in her house, when the door seemed to disappear in a flash. A man came in and grabbed her, putting a knife against her throat. The guards outside came in, all with their guns aimed at the man. She wasn't listening too intently, but apparently the man wanted to talk with the Fuhrer. His request was denied and the guards shot. Unfortunately, the shots weren't quick enough. She felt the knife move against her neck. The cold blade slicing her throat. A warm liquid started to drip down onto her chest and bubble up into her mouth. It was getting harder to breath. She dropped to the ground. She was so dizzy, everything started going black. She died right there, right then. Her father was alerted what had happened. He came to the house with one guard by his side and did the forbidden. He tried to bring her back to life. It didn't work too well. A creature was born, but it wasn't what he wanted. The creature was given to scientists to be studied. The body started to grow into a creature that acted sort of like a chameleon. Whoever the creature saw, it would take the appearance of. The creature grew in captivity. They didn't allow it to look at anyone, keeping it in a room of one-sided windows. The creature started to learn. It learned to control what it looked like on its own, and eventually it learned to completely change the shape of it's body all-in-all. The most disturbing part of the test is when the creature took the appearance of a small girl. One that had been dead for two years. It seemed to stay in this appearance for it's life. The creature was now considered a girl, as it's main body was female. She didn't like how her life worked, being studied like this in a small chamber. She turned her arm into a large hammer-like shape and bashed it against the wall, breaking it. She ran. She ran for a long, long time. Now, she's still running, and will never stop.

RP Sample: She walked the streets of the town, the moonlight making her light blue hair glow. She didn't really like the town. She was created in a hidden lab somewhere here, but she made sure to steer clear of the lab during her walk. Everything was so quiet, there was nobody anywhere. She kept walking, not taking a moment to stop. She saw a solitaire man walking the streets. It was just him and her. She walked over to him, a scared look on her face. She didn't even wait for him to ask what was wrong, she turned her arm into a spike and stabbed him. He fell to the ground and she took the look of him. Her new body dragged him into some bushes and started to trail through his pockets. She got his name and all his money. He wasn't a too wealthy man, but every penny counts, and she would at least have a house to sleep in tonight. She stood up, wiping the blood off her hand using his clothing. This would be a good night. She walked to the address displayed on the set of keys she found. Heh, he might even have a wife, or some children. This should be fun.
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PostSubject: Re: The Sin of Envy   The Sin of Envy I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 26, 2009 11:06 pm

The only thing thats bothering me is the RP Sample...
Its good so far, but i think u should lengthen it
And maybe add what happens to the family? If there is one..


Just like how ur bio is really good, u can apply that to ur RP sample.
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Posts : 86
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Allignment: Homunculi

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PostSubject: Re: The Sin of Envy   The Sin of Envy I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 26, 2009 11:12 pm

Yup, you're perfect for moderating and approving. You're my head application mod. I'd fix it, but I'm a little busy with the site, and I know my RP style, so it should be fine. That's only in there so I can be sure how the person is gonna RP. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Sin of Envy   The Sin of Envy I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 26, 2009 11:16 pm

I understand of course, but still doesnt hurt to make a sightful nudge here and there.

Then, with the power invested in me, i name u an APPROVED CHARACTER

lol Razz
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Posts : 86
Join date : 2009-12-26
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Age: 3
Allignment: Homunculi

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PostSubject: Re: The Sin of Envy   The Sin of Envy I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 26, 2009 11:28 pm

Ahh, and remember when you approve characters, weapons, or alchemy be sure to lock the topic and move it to the approve section.
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